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A lightning charged fiend!
About this creation
On the lego message boards eternal, I have a RPC called Stormchaser on the bionicle roleplay. I decided to make a MOC of him! He is a member of Airwatcher’s species who likes to build things and cause a lot of trouble. He has a battery pack on his back that powers his weapons with electricity!




The full view of the build. The main problem is that it is not very stable, and falls over a lot. He is also a bit bigger than expected. I also had to use flat ground so I moved my location.



The feet.



Close up on his rotating blades.



His homemade Cordak blaster is smaller than the regular ones so he isn’t weighed down during flight.



His wings are based on Airwatcher’s.



A back view where you can see his battery pack.



Top down view.



Side view.

I am quite proud of this build. All feedback would be appreciated and if you can advise me on how I could impove his stability that would be great. If you have time, please take a look at my other builds.

Thanks for looking!



Comments

 I like it 
  February 14, 2018
Nice! I like it! A bit skeletal though- especially those legs. It does give it a neat look though. But I'd still recommend armoring up the legs a bit.
 I like it 
  February 11, 2018
The cordak blaster looks really great!
 I made it 
  February 11, 2018
Quoting Dat SpicyPorg It's skinny for a Titan build, but I think it adds to the character.
He wasn’t supposed to be this big. :P
 I made it 
  February 11, 2018
Quoting JimiFurno RedXD001 This is looking pretty good. The biggest problem is the legs. As you have already said they don't offer much stability and I can sorta see why. They are built kinda funny. Try looking up instructions for Titan builds, like: Von Nebula, Keetongu, Fire Lord, Witch Doctor, Maxilos and Spinax, and any combo models. You say you lack a large collection so this may help ya get some ideas to improve.
I should totally try that! Thanks!
 I like it 
  February 10, 2018
It's skinny for a Titan build, but I think it adds to the character.
 I like it 
  February 10, 2018
Nice, though it's a little gappy, next time try to find some armor to cover those gaps, cuz it Kinda looks like a Toa Kaita. I also noticed that you had three joints in the arm, which is fine, but try to make the joints more realistic next time. Good job otherwise though, It's tricky to build at this scale, but once you've mastered it, the titans you will create will be, well, awesome.
 I like it 
  February 10, 2018
This is looking pretty good. The biggest problem is the legs. As you have already said they don't offer much stability and I can sorta see why. They are built kinda funny. Try looking up instructions for Titan builds, like: Von Nebula, Keetongu, Fire Lord, Witch Doctor, Maxilos and Spinax, and any combo models. You say you lack a large collection so this may help ya get some ideas to improve.
 
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