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RaptorTalon: Vengeful Vanguard (V14)
Hello! As you may have noticed, it's been almost a year since the last version of RaptorTalon was posted, which may seem a bit odd with how many versions I made during the first year or so of his existence. I decided to take quality over quantity, and only post a new version if he was completely overhauled. And here we are. Today marks three years of RaptorTalon being my selfMOC, and hes had quite a ride so far. This is his fourteenth version yet, and easily my favorite.
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RT~



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 I made it 
  October 26, 2017
Quoting NewDrewBuilder1992 /// Great upgrade. I love it.
Thanks!
  October 26, 2017
Great upgrade. I love it.
 I made it 
  October 26, 2017
Quoting [ Kromastus ] Very nice upgrade, particularly loving the weapons and the colour. You've managed to retain the Hero Factory look while developing some really unique build elements. I love the use of the barbs on the chest, they look great.
Thanks man!
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  October 25, 2017
Very nice upgrade, particularly loving the weapons and the colour. You've managed to retain the Hero Factory look while developing some really unique build elements. I love the use of the barbs on the chest, they look great.
 I made it 
  September 25, 2017
Quoting Emperor Neron :OOOOO That Gatling Gun!!!! Is there a chance you could post instructions for it?
Maybe one day, don't count on it. Thanks!
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  September 25, 2017
:OOOOO That Gatling Gun!!!! Is there a chance you could post instructions for it?
 I made it 
  September 22, 2017
Quoting Krayjax (formerly Jack Campbell) Cool!
Thanks!
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  September 22, 2017
Cool!
 I made it 
  September 16, 2017
Quoting King Lewie Although everyone is saying that he is too skinny in the waist I personally think that its a cool effect, makes him seem strong yet nimble if you know what I mean. Excellent work buddy!
That was kinda intended, as he's meant to be a CQC powerhouse. But it's also just because I like that look on my MOCs. Thanks man!
 I like it 
  September 15, 2017
Although everyone is saying that he is too skinny in the waist I personally think that its a cool effect, makes him seem strong yet nimble if you know what I mean. Excellent work buddy!
 I made it 
  September 14, 2017
Quoting Solias Toa of Earth Uh question.. does he have torso articulation?
Yep! He has a pretty decent waist swivel and can sorta go forwards a tad, plus tilting side to side a smidge. It's not great but it does what it needs.
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  September 13, 2017
Uh question.. does he have torso articulation?
 I made it 
  September 12, 2017
Quoting Ben Cossy That chest design is super cool! I'm amazed I've never seen that piece used as a shield before, it looks fantastic here! Great idea!
Many thanks Ben!
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  September 12, 2017
That chest design is super cool! I'm amazed I've never seen that piece used as a shield before, it looks fantastic here! Great idea!
 I made it 
  September 8, 2017
Quoting Toa Gaim Awesome update though he may need a extra sword, but that just me.
Thanks! And yeah, he does. I just don't have the pieces.
 I made it 
  September 8, 2017
Quoting Solias Toa of Earth does lower legs though...
Thanks?
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  September 8, 2017
Awesome update though he may need a extra sword, but that just me.
  September 8, 2017
does lower legs though...
 I made it 
  September 7, 2017
Quoting [ C.P.D. ] Great weapons and overall a solid MOC, yet I agree with Wertman if he is saying that the proportions of the waist are a little whack.
Danke.
 I like it 
  September 7, 2017
Great weapons and overall a solid MOC, yet I agree with Wertman if he is saying that the proportions of the waist are a little whack.
 I made it 
  September 7, 2017
Quoting Wertman 8 Lookin' very nice my friend! I gave my critique on discord obviously, but this looks very nice- while I like what you did with the abdomen, I generally prefer the torso design of the previous version- I felt it was much better proportioned while adhering to your general style of bulky chest and skinny waist- but I can't complain too much, it IS a new RaptorTalon MOC, after all! Can't wait for what else you have in store for us! :D
Thanks! While I personally dissagree, I'm grateful for the sentiment.
 I like it 
  September 7, 2017
Lookin' very nice my friend! I gave my critique on discord obviously, but this looks very nice- while I like what you did with the abdomen, I generally prefer the torso design of the previous version- I felt it was much better proportioned while adhering to your general style of bulky chest and skinny waist- but I can't complain too much, it IS a new RaptorTalon MOC, after all! Can't wait for what else you have in store for us! :D
 I made it 
  September 7, 2017
Quoting Ivan Toa of Ingenuity Very nice! the only thing i would say is his waist is a bit thin and his shoulders are a bit wide but apart from that he's really good.
Thanks!
 I made it 
  September 7, 2017
Quoting Werewolff . Some brilliant work at play here, particularly in the lower leg and stomach regions. Easily the best version yet, (though I'm thinking it may have been the most headache inducing as well? :D)
Many thanks! And...yeah, you'd be right.
 I made it 
  September 7, 2017
Quoting High Emperor Duckie I was speaking of the stomach
Ah...I'll respectfully disagree.
 I like it 
  September 7, 2017
Very nice! the only thing i would say is his waist is a bit thin and his shoulders are a bit wide but apart from that he's really good.
 I like it 
  September 7, 2017
Some brilliant work at play here, particularly in the lower leg and stomach regions. Easily the best version yet, (though I'm thinking it may have been the most headache inducing as well? :D)
  September 7, 2017
I was speaking of the stomach
 I made it 
  September 7, 2017
Quoting Traykar Pawfoot Fantastic work! Everything just flows together, and it really looks as though it's it's own independent thing, rather than a lego moc. It really pulls off the brawler look, nice work!
Thanks a bunch! very intentional!
 I like it 
  September 7, 2017
Fantastic work! Everything just flows together, and it really looks as though it's it's own independent thing, rather than a lego moc. It really pulls off the brawler look, nice work!
 I made it 
  September 7, 2017
Quoting High Emperor Duckie I literally had a "contained explosion of happiness" face the entire time I was looking at this. Amazing work. I love the legs and arms. That torso is really good too. Not sure if the skinniness is intended, but great work. Those weapons are killer too
Heh, thanks a bunch! Not sure what part you think is super skinny, but thanks anyway.
 I like it 
  September 7, 2017
I literally had a "contained explosion of happiness" face the entire time I was looking at this. Amazing work. I love the legs and arms. That torso is really good too. Not sure if the skinniness is intended, but great work. Those weapons are killer too
 I made it 
  September 7, 2017
Quoting Makuta's Descendant - Wow, he's come a long way from V1. Either way he still looks amazing. I freakin love the shield, what part is that?
Thanks man! The shield is quite a few parts, actually. But the main four are some old UFO saucer pieces.
 I like it 
  September 7, 2017
Wow, he's come a long way from V1. Either way he still looks amazing. I freakin love the shield, what part is that?
 I made it 
  September 7, 2017
Quoting Daniel H. Woaaaaahh!!!! Freaking epic!!
Thanks!
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  September 7, 2017
Woaaaaahh!!!! Freaking epic!!
 I made it 
  September 7, 2017
Quoting Pakari Nation99 Great work as usual, RT! I love the hands, and the shaping is on point! My only suggestion would be to beef up his torso a bit more, but as is he is fantastic as usual!
Thanks man!
  September 7, 2017
Great work as usual, RT! I love the hands, and the shaping is on point! My only suggestion would be to beef up his torso a bit more, but as is he is fantastic as usual!
 
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