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The Insurgency: #5 The Forgoten One. (GC)
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This is part 5 of my character's story and my first entry to a monthly challenge. If this doesn't fit with the setting of the challenge I can change it to a free build. Hope you enjoy!
About this creation
Date: February 19th 2097.
Location: Iapra.




GI Sergent Fredrick Connery: It's been two days since that "One" Character was defeated. The Government sent me and my troop to try and track down the source of some signals similar to that of the battle on Qoter. However we lost the signal a few hours ago and had to continue to search the area on foot in order to make a surprise attack on the Junk-bots.

Sergent Connery: Stay alert men. I can see the satellite station!



Later at the Satellite Station...

Sergent Connery. Alright. Here's the plan. Davis? You'll place the detonators. Private Henderson? You'll stand guard at the door. Smith and I will take out any junk bots. Any questions?
Troop: No Sir!
Sergent Connery: Then let's roll out! For the Imperium!
*With that we entered the abandoned station.*



Once we got there however. we found something rather unnerving.
Private Kenny Smith: Looks like someone already handled the Junk-bots Sir.
*Kenny tosses a junk-bot head onto the floor.*
Sergent Connery: Well that explains where the signal went.
Private Greg Henderson: I've got a bad feeling about this place Sarge...
Sergent Connery: Agreed. Let's try and get this done as quickly as possible-

Lieutenant Elijah Davis: Sarge! Over here! I found something.



Sergent Connery: What the Heck happened to him?

Davis: From the look of it He had his arm cut off, was hung here and-
Sergent Connery: I can see that Lieutenant Obvious! I meant who did it?
Davis: Not sure. It looks like he was a technician so most likely Raiders or Pirates. One thing is for sure. It wasn't the junk bots. This is too time consuming for them. They work quick.
Henderson: And the feeling just got worse.
Sergent Connery: Come on men. We need to get this done before the same thing happens to us. Smith! We're moving-



I turned to see that Smith had been killed and had a knife stuck into torso.

Sergent: Damn it! Ready your guns men!

Then I heard a maniacal laugh echo throughout the room.

*Ah ha ha ha! I see you found my new hideout. Don't worry. I don't require compensation for eliminating the bots...*

Davis: The Only thing you'll be getting is a round of led!

*Ooh. A smart one. I'd be threatened by that remark but I see you are unarmed... Literally!*

*Then I heard the sound of a concrete saw followed by a scream.*



Davis: ARGH! My Arm!
Sergent Connery: Henderson! Get Davis out of here! I'll handle this punk.
Henderson: But Sarge-
Sergent Connery: THAT'S AN ORDER!
Henderson: Yes Sir!



As The rest of my troop left I readied my rife and called out to the enemy.

Sergent Connery: Alright. Enough is enough! Come out and face me like a man!
*Not unless you say please...*
Sergent Connery: What?
*You heard me.*
Sergent Connery: Fine! Come out please.
*A little grumpy but you always were a sourpuss.*



*Then a figure stepped out of the shadows and right in front of me stood a man I had thought to belong dead.*
Figure: Hello Connery. Long time no see.
Sergent Connery: B... But you're dead! You died in the shift! I saw your ship get destroyed!
Figure: You neglected to see the escape pod deploy. I escaped the demise of the rest of my crew and fled here. I have stayed in the shadows up until now though.
Sergent Connery: I'd thank you for your help with the mission if you hadn't killed my best soldier!
Figure: He was but a pawn. He would have died in another battle anyway. I just saved him some time. As for the bots. This is all staged. The real station is miles away! I just scattered some junk around and and mimicked the signal In order to lure you in.
Sergent Connery: You're crazy!
Figure: No. I am sane. For you see a crazy man will not admit he is crazy. I on the other hand know that I am nutter than a fruitcake! So therefore I am sane. Isn't that crazy?
Sergent Connery: Well what is it you want?
Figure: Vengeance my friend. Vengeance. And I have a favor to axe of you.
Sergent Connery: You mean ask.
Figure: No I mean AXE!



*The Madman threw his axe at me cutting off my hand.*
Sergent Connery: ARGH!



I bent over in pain as the Madman continued to talk.

Madman: I need you to deliver a message to Major Henderson. Tell him "The Leviathan is out for revenge!" Now get out of here before I change my mind about letting you live!
Sergent Connery: Edward. It doesn't have to be like this.
Madman: EDWARD IS DEAD! ONLY LEVIATHAN LIVES!
Sergent Connery: But your family-
Leviathan: GET OUT!!!

*I then ran out as fast as I could.*



Leviathan: Our family is alive?.. Excellent. The Boy will be helpful to our plans... Our plans for vengeance...

To be Continued...



Comments

 I like it 
  March 21, 2017
Nice! Quite a well-written plot in this one, lots of cool twists. This Edward character also seems very interesting. :D
 I made it 
  March 20, 2017
Quoting Uncategorizable Potato I personally would have used "dang", but oh well.
Yeah. I normally always use dang or darn but in the case of an angry Sergent I used the slightly less polite version of it.
 I like it 
  March 19, 2017
I personally would have used "dang", but oh well.
 I made it 
  March 19, 2017
Quoting Garrett W. Great episode! I'll probably reference this in my entry! Is it alright if feature Henderson?
Of course! That'd be great!
  March 19, 2017
Great episode! I'll probably reference this in my entry! Is it alright if feature Henderson?
 I like it 
  March 19, 2017
Ooh! I liked the twist about it not being the real base! Good luck in the GC! --Blast--
 I made it 
  March 19, 2017
Quoting Traykar the swift Very nice! I'm happy to see something I did has ended up in someone else's story. As for the parental guidance thing, this doesn't break it. So no worries.
Thanks! I didn't know if it did break it or not. I've taken it off now though.
 I like it 
  March 19, 2017
Very nice! I'm happy to see something I did has ended up in someone else's story. As for the parental guidance thing, this doesn't break it. So no worries.
 
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