Quoting Wertman 8
Nice revamp, though I'd be lying if I said I didn't prefer the original; that glow-in-the-dark blue was a bolder and more vibrant secondary colour than trans-light blue. I like what you did for the shoulders here, with those pieces sloping down instead of upward; however, I think the torso would need to be slightly wider for it to work completely; he looks kinda stretched and squashed, really; he could stand to be wider as well as taller. The torso could be a tad shorter as well- he doesn't quite look proportionate. On a final note, I really like what you did with the weapon, putting the lightsaber blade between the Chronicler's Blade piece. It's a decent revamp, though there are a lot of things you could do to improve him. Apologies if I sound harsh :P
as for the glow in the dark pieces, I do wish I could have kept them as they not only are what you said, but they also sorta defined him before from ekimu :P. I shall take into account all that you have said. Also about the spear, I don't think that was originally my idea.. So..