My fifth and final build for business league in the insurgency. Does not feature my main character but will tie into my storyline. Please comment and rate!
About this creation
November 4, 2096. Illbliss, Qoter
The sudden discovery and collapse of old Qoter two months ago disrupted the entire planet, but life slowly filtered back into the undamaged areas. In Illbliss, citizens once again went about their work, keeping one eye on the chasm as cranes pulled out rubble and twisted steel. In a small Illbliss shipbuilding facility, we find workers filling a contract for the GI...
The contract called for 20 small shuttles, lightly armed and carrying several people as well as cargo. The workers were ahead of schedule and felt free to converse while they labored...
"Little to the left...little more...okay, that's good. say, what does the imperium want with these anyway?" one worker asked. "Probably to police the new refugee camps" said another worker. The third worker disagreed: "or maybe to hunt those pesky collective drones. There were drones on my level last night and I couldn't get home. I had to sleep in my speeder!"
"We'll probably find out eventually, said the first worker. "Shuttles this small can't be very secret".
They didn't notice the supervisor sneaking up from the other side of the shuttle until he was near them. "Good work boys. Going to have this one finished today yet? Good. I came to tell you, there's been drones spotted in our area. if you're going to go home, stick together and avoid the lower levels if you can...I'm heading home, so see you here in the morning."
Good stuff! Nicely written! I liked the inclusion of drones and also about refugee camps! That's a nice addition to the overall story! Well done! Your points have been added! That is also this League complete, so feel free to move onto another if you so desire.