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LOM-May UC- (crossover part 11)
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The heat of a summer day was beginning to take its toll over Jako. Well the fact that he was bleeding from a dozen places and was in the midst of the battle that was not in his favor. This was because there had been many more dwarves than expected and some ill planning by others. He and Matthias were surrounded by many dwarves and they were forced to fight back to back.
“Jako if we get through this promise me you will do one thing.” Said Matthias form behind him.
“And what would that be,” said Jako while bringing down a killing blow upon a dwarf.
“Grow some facial hair,” Said Matthias.
“What?” you pretty much could have asked for anything else and you ask for that?”
“Well,” Matthias started but stopped to block a cut. “I think you would look good with it, and maybe finally get a girl.” Jako just shook his head in distaste.
“Why Matthias, just why,” groaned Jako.

And here is a photo of the build. and I just passed 300 points (or so I think) :P



Comments

 I like it 
  June 5, 2016
Cool terrain, like the wall!
 I like it 
  June 3, 2016
Great job! yes facial hair is always the best; makes you look like a Canadian lumberjack if grown properly. :)
 I like it 
  May 31, 2016
No pig? :O Anyway, nice work. :P
 I made it 
  May 30, 2016
Quoting Gilbert Despathens You know what I saw in your story? SNEAKY FORESHADOWING! You know what I didn't see? An explanation of the mysterious caves underneath. :P Impressive entry all the same.
I forgot about that, oh well :P
 I like it 
  May 30, 2016
I love how you added dialog in the midst of the battle and in between action. My Creative Writing teacher says that's how you should add dialog (in the midst of action).
 I like it 
  May 30, 2016
You know what I saw in your story? SNEAKY FORESHADOWING! You know what I didn't see? An explanation of the mysterious caves underneath. :P Impressive entry all the same.
 I like it 
  May 30, 2016
I like the defenses, and the little cave, which I presume ya'll build to get under? Great build!
 I like it 
  May 30, 2016
Great work! That's four down, nine to go.
 I like it 
  May 30, 2016
I love the underground cave section. Great work!
 I like it 
  May 30, 2016
Personally, I think Jako could look good with facial hair.
 
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