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Introducing, the third and second members of the Toa Alkan... After this, all I need to post is the mysterious leader that rounded them all up. Stay tuned! But for now, enjoy!
About this creation

Name: Gallyx
Aliases: Sister, Toa, mind-reader, hero, Gally
Species: Ce-Toa
Gender: Female
Status: Alive
Affiliations: Toa Alkan, The Storyteller
Kanohi: Vako, Mask of Psychometry
Powers: Weak mind-control, mind reading, telekinesis and telepathy

"Hey there!"

"Now, I know what you're thinking (literally)... You're thinking 'a staff, what a stupid weapon!'"

"Well, I'll show you just what this staff can do-"

"Woah, sister, who are you talking to?"
"Akai! Go away! Ugh!"

Name: Akaitu
Aliases: Brother, Toa, bruiser, hero, Akai
Species: Po-Toa
Gender: Male
Status: Alive
Affiliations: Toa Alkan, The Storyteller
Kanohi: Komau, Mask of Mind Control
Powers: Control over stone, enhanced strength

"Sorry, sister!"

"Hmmm... I feel strangely compelled to randomly start talking about myself..."

"Hey there! Me and Gallyx here were some of the first people in the Alkan to be recruited, followed by Rintak, then Fortiss, then Bomola. But who am I?"

"I'm Akaitu, Toa of Stone. That's all you need to know."
"Ugh, you're so overly dramatic."

Alkan: ORIGINS

Akaitu and Gallyx, as Matoran, were the first on Agni Nui to find their Toa Stones and become Toa. Thus, they were some of the most experienced of the team. They were friends as long as they'd known, though it may not seem that way to others. They trust one-another with their lives.

When they were approached by a Toa of Earth asking them to make a Toa team with him, they jumped at the opportunity. Gallyx used her powers to locate like-minded individuals and recruit them to their team right up until half way through the war with the Dark Hunters, when they found Bomola and completed the team.

The rest, as they say, is history.

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Right, onto the builds! First, Gallyx.

I tried to make her feminine without employing overused techniques such as nuvaboobs. Namely, I made the shoulders and waist the same width.

She has a very dangerous ponytail. Back is otherwise meh.

Legs. Non-custom, but nice.

Fully custom arms. I'm really proud of the design of both sections, to be honest.

Aaaand the body. I like the Nuva chest piece. Her colour scheme is a bit scattered. The silver/grey is supposed to be protodermis armour, whereas the gold is [some other metal].

Custom head!

Now onto Akaitu. I really tried to get a stocky, muscular build for him. Sorta dwarflike tbh. I actually made him ages ago (literally about six months) so he's my oldest moc that I have built. I doubt I'll ever have the heart to break him down in the near future. Because of the age, his body doesn't have waist articulation, but I think that's ok. I really like the black shinguards, but the picture of them refused to upload >:(

And the arms. Honestly, the upper arms aren't great, but at least they're custom. Pretty posable too. Very similar to Gallyx, as I based her design off his to try and make them look more similar. They're actually some of my shortest mocs, with only around a cm of difference in height between them.

Back. Ok coverage on the body, kinda shoddy everywhere else though.

And here's all their gear! Akaitu's mace and shield and Gallyx's staff. And, as a bonus, there's a machinegun in there for Gallyx. Don't let Akai near that.

Batter up!

Bonk!

"Prepare for trouble!"
"Make it double!"

Team Alkan's blasting off agaiiiiiiiiiiin!

Teaser!
"You Toa fools are in over your head..."

Parting shot! Thanks for visiting, remember to C&C!

Note: the photo quality is only so poor because I used the simple uploaded. Sigh.



Comments

 I like it 
  February 3, 2018
I love the staff on one of them.
 I made it 
  September 14, 2015
Quoting Sean /EMMSixteenA4 I'm glad you're progressing as a MOC artist, but there's a few big issues. I think that Gallyx's bust is ridiculous. She's not an visual novel character, so tone that down :P Also, Akaitu doesn't look bulky. He's a broad guy with bones for upper arms and HF shells for lower arms. I like to be candid with you because I think you are the current up-and-coming MOCist, frankly. You show the most potential out of anybody I've seen during the last year or so... So I won't cut you much slack. I'm going to tell you that those arms just do not cut it. I love Gallyx other than her giant bust, and I'd have to recommend a feminine mask, but I'm not convinced on Akaitu. (But I really appreciate the Team Rocket references, those were sweet :P)
Wow, I really appreciate the compliments about me, so thanks so much for all that :) The only other dark blue mask I have is a Faxon, which I didn't want to use because it looks really ugly, and I certainly wasn't going to use the Rau, so my only other option was the Komau. I don't like it any more than you do, but it was pretty much my only option :I I agree with your comments about Akaitu, but most of that is simply because he is a very old moc- the oldest moc that I still have assembled. Don't worry, you can expect much more for the V2s... Thanks for the critique!
 I like it 
  September 14, 2015
I'm glad you're progressing as a MOC artist, but there's a few big issues. I think that Gallyx's bust is ridiculous. She's not an visual novel character, so tone that down :P Also, Akaitu doesn't look bulky. He's a broad guy with bones for upper arms and HF shells for lower arms. I like to be candid with you because I think you are the current up-and-coming MOCist, frankly. You show the most potential out of anybody I've seen during the last year or so... So I won't cut you much slack. I'm going to tell you that those arms just do not cut it. I love Gallyx other than her giant bust, and I'd have to recommend a feminine mask, but I'm not convinced on Akaitu. (But I really appreciate the Team Rocket references, those were sweet :P)
 I made it 
  September 14, 2015
Thanks for the comments everyone! I shall be taking thiss all into account :)
 I made it 
  September 12, 2015
Quoting Dragoneye Creations Nice duo! I agree with you on the usage of nuvaboobs, because I have two MOCs using Nuva torso armor instead of the shoulder armor. But, one of my recent ones use the nuvaboobs (I'm such a hypocrite). Anyways, pretty nice with Akaitu as well. But, it seems like Akaitu doesn't have a lot of brown in his color scheme. Add a bit more brown to him, and you'll be set!!
Thanks for the comment! Sorry I didn't reply sooner, I only just got the email. I agree with you about the lack of brown, but sadly most of the brown pieces I own are broken (such as the matoran feet I planned to use for upper arms... Grr).
 I made it 
  September 8, 2015
Quoting Windfall the Wanderer I am in love with these mocs. Only thing I have to say is that Akaitu needs better arms. Honestly though, I really like these mocs!
Better arms, got it. Thanks for the kind words!
 I like it 
  September 7, 2015
Nice duo! I agree with you on the usage of nuvaboobs, because I have two MOCs using Nuva torso armor instead of the shoulder armor. But, one of my recent ones use the nuvaboobs (I'm such a hypocrite). Anyways, pretty nice with Akaitu as well. But, it seems like Akaitu doesn't have a lot of brown in his color scheme. Add a bit more brown to him, and you'll be set!!
 I like it 
  September 5, 2015
I am in love with these mocs. Only thing I have to say is that Akaitu needs better arms. Honestly though, I really like these mocs!
Sunder
Toa Blizzard The Storyteller
  September 3, 2015
Very nice work on both of them. I love the concept of them both and I'm very interested in the identity of the mocs in that teaser.
 I made it 
  September 3, 2015
Quoting De Silva How, have I not seen your MOCs before? They're both good, but the Toa of Stone's torso is too wide. Other than that, nice.
Cheers! I'm fairly new to the site, so it's not all that surprising that you haven't seen any of my mocs before.
 I made it 
  September 3, 2015
Quoting Orthos the Repented, (Destroyer of Mercenoid Prototype 9.2) This is amazing! I would recommend heavier armor for Akai's shoulders though. Otherwise, this is perfect!
Thanks! Yeah, if I revisit Akai in the future, I'll definitely be adding more protection for his arms. I think some big, knightly pauldrons would look nice.
  September 3, 2015
How, have I not seen your MOCs before? They're both good, but the Toa of Stone's torso is too wide. Other than that, nice.
 I like it 
  September 3, 2015
This is amazing! I would recommend heavier armor for Akai's shoulders though. Otherwise, this is perfect!
 I made it 
  September 3, 2015
Quoting Chouju_X [SPAM] Awesome! I really like Akaitu, and Gallyx' "hair" reminds me of one of those old Kenner Predators. They had one with its dreadlocks ending in a mace.
Thanks! Speaking of Predator, I do have a slightly Predator-inspired moc coming up... So stay tuned!
 I like it 
  September 3, 2015
Awesome! I really like Akaitu, and Gallyx' "hair" reminds me of one of those old Kenner Predators. They had one with its dreadlocks ending in a mace.
 I made it 
  September 3, 2015
Quoting Wertman 8 These are some awesome MOCs man! I very much like Gallyx's design, especially those shoulders! The only thing is that gap in her chest you can see from the profile. I think the Nuva piece could have been embedded into the torso a little better. Akaitu is pretty awesome too! Yeah, the shoulders are a bit wierd. The design itself is good, but for someone who is supposed to be the "Brawn", he couldn't be hurt with a bit of armour up there! But these are some good Toa MOCs!
Cheers! I guess you're right, but 'Brains and Brawn' sounds better than 'Brains and Kinda Stong Guy' ;P Thanks for the consturctive criticism!
 I made it 
  September 3, 2015
Quoting Toa Blizzard The Storyteller Very nice work on both of them. I love the concept of them both and I'm very interested in the identity of the mocs in that teaser.
Thanks! Don't worry, all will be revealed soon enough...
 I like it 
  September 3, 2015
These are some awesome MOCs man! I very much like Gallyx's design, especially those shoulders! The only thing is that gap in her chest you can see from the profile. I think the Nuva piece could have been embedded into the torso a little better. Akaitu is pretty awesome too! Yeah, the shoulders are a bit wierd. The design itself is good, but for someone who is supposed to be the "Brawn", he couldn't be hurt with a bit of armour up there! But these are some good Toa MOCs!
 
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