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Darkness Born : (1) A New Age
Cloud City has finally been liberated from CIS control. News spreads across the galaxy that General Grievous is finally dead. Peace can finally become a reality in a galaxy that has known nothing but war.
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19 Years Before the Battle of Yavin Mere Moments Before Order 66



Jedi Master Carth walks into the command room filled with clones. He thinks to himself that it is nice to see them all relaxing, after all taking back Cloud City had some high costs.



The Clone Captain turns to see the Jedi general.
Clone Captain: "General, you will not believe the news."
Carth stands puzzled.
Carth: "What is it Captain Hawk? "
The two share a close bound. The served along side each other at the Battle of Geonosis, back then they were both new to battle.



Hawk: "General Grievous is dead,"
The clones in the room chant in excitement, Hawk continues,
Hawk: "I guess we will all be out of a job soon."
Carth answers with a solemn tone.
Carth: "With peace time there will come some changes, but it is no change compared to what we have faced already. If this news is true, then I must return to the Jedi Temple."



Carth calls a clone from the corner of the room.
Carth: "Trooper, Ready my ship. I must leave as soon as possible."
The clone snaps to a salute,
Clone: "Right away, sir!"



As the young general exits the room he leaves a final order for Hawk.
Carth: "Look after the city while I am gone. And Hawk, get some rest, you have earned it."
Hawk replies like he has a thousand times before.
Hawk: "Yes sir!"
Carth feels something tug at him in the force, as voices whisper in his ear.
Force Ghost: Little did the young Jedi know that the faint whisper in the Force he feels, was the countless deaths of Jedi across the galaxy.



As Carth approached his ship, a strange disturbance crippled him in unimaginable pain.
Force Ghost: He heard them all, each individual's scream. His friends, the only family he had. They were dying. He was dying on the inside.




The Captain gazes at the closed door. All the memories of the war rushes to his head. The battles that he faced, the men that he lost, and the Jedi who gave their lives for clones and a broken Republic. A clone breaks the Captain's stare.
Clone: "Urgent message Captain, it is from Coruscant."
Hawk replies as he regains reality.
Hawk: "...Patch it through."



The Holotable flickers to life. A cloaked figure stands, disfigured but still recognizable as the Chancellor of the Republic.
~The time has come, execute Order 66.~
The Captain hesitates for a moment, but only a moment.
Hawk: "It will be done my Lord."



Hawk: "You two come with me!"
Without hesitation the troopers answered.
Clones: "Right away sir!"



Carth: "What is going on? Why does it feel like the Force is being torn from me?"
As Carth contemplates he notices a detachment of clones move swiftly towards him.
Carth: "Hawk, what is going on?"



Hawk: "Men open fire! Blast the traitor!"
Carth protests,
Carth: "Stand down!"



Carth realizing the danger he is in reacts, calling upon the Force he blasts the clones away from him. But Hawk is able to catch the Jedi off guard and he lunges at him.



Disarmed and with no where to go Carth knows this is the end. Then a faint whisper enters his head. Carth battles with the conflicting ideals of the voice, but in the end he gives in.
Force Ghost: "As the Captain moved to execute the Jedi little did he know the horror he would unleash. Carth always had anger, and in this very moment he opened up to his anger and opened his heart to the darkness."



Carth releases his hatred and his anger all at once, it exits his body in the form of Force Lighting. Frying the clone captain from the inside out.
Force Ghost: "Hawk was a tough clone to serve alongside, but he was no match for Carth. He never stood a chance. A neither did the rest of the clones on the station."



Carth clears room after room of clones. Using Hawk's blade he impales a clone that is fleeing in terror.



Force Ghost: "Bodies layout all across the station. It was a massacre. Not a single clone was left alive."



Carth stares at all the death and the destruction. He feels alive once again. The whisper returns to him, its calling him. Carth now sets out in search of the voice and the answers he need. In search of power...


Author's Comments

Hope you guys enjoyed! And if you have not caught on this is a frame story, the Force Ghost in the prologue is telling this story to the Jedi Master, which allows me as the writer to foreshadow events that are soon to unfold. If anyone is interest in this comic and many more, why not join Lego Comic Masters and Fan Club your one stop place for some of the best comics in all of Mocpages!

Chapter List
Darkness Born : Prologue
Darkness Born : A New Age
Darkness Born : Rising Star
Darkness Born : Old Wounds
Darkness Born : Hidden Threat
Darkness Born : Bloodline
Darkness Born : Intensive Care
Darkness Born : Another Man's Trash
Darkness Born : Destiny

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Comments

 I like it 
  September 27, 2015
Argh! Why do the clones have to do order 66!
 I made it 
  February 18, 2015
Quoting Jedi Master Rave Holy cow, this is epic! Very professional looking. Amazing job on the effects. Bravo!
Thank you so much!!
 I like it 
  January 27, 2015
Holy cow, this is epic! Very professional looking. Amazing job on the effects. Bravo!
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  January 11, 2015
Quoting Kermunklin the Giant Evil House Head Nice story-love how you set this part in cloud city. Fantastic editing skills! The force ghost from the prologue, Palpatines hologram, the enhanced LEGO lightning-all look completely professional. What program do you use?
Thank you so much. I use a mixture of Adobe Lightroom and Photoshop CS6
 I like it 
  January 11, 2015
Nice story-love how you set this part in cloud city. Fantastic editing skills! The force ghost from the prologue, Palpatines hologram, the enhanced LEGO lightning-all look completely professional. What program do you use?
 I made it 
  January 7, 2015
Quoting Jensen Anderson Beautiful editing, totally loving the effects, and I can't wait to see more! Keep em coming :)
Thanks! I make sure to do the best I can!
 I like it 
  January 7, 2015
Beautiful editing, totally loving the effects, and I can't wait to see more! Keep em coming :)
 I made it 
  January 6, 2015
Quoting --R.K. Blast-- Nice editing. I look forward to reading the rest of the series. --Blast--
Thanks!
 I made it 
  January 6, 2015
Quoting Benjamin Olson Very, very good! I like it a lot! Looking forward to the next part!
Thanks so much!
 I made it 
  January 6, 2015
Quoting Dark Mercenary Kydan Witress Love it! Each picture and effects are wonderful. Looking forward to the next chapter ;)
Thanks! I try my best to make every photo have the best effects I can make.
 I like it 
  January 6, 2015
Nice editing. I look forward to reading the rest of the series. --Blast--
 I like it 
  January 6, 2015
Very, very good! I like it a lot! Looking forward to the next part!
 I like it 
  January 6, 2015
Love it! Each picture and effects are wonderful. Looking forward to the next chapter ;)
 
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