BMC R3 entry (Theme: prosthetic/robotic body parts)
About this creation
Almost no story this time, since it's the last day and I don't know what the deadline is because it's not my timezone. Also no fancy title pic- this is from my dad's laptop (mine broke) and he doesn't have Office or anything like that, so no editing for me. :/
Also, the uploader seems to work funny on this laptop compared to my own (mine is Windows 7, his is 8), so I'm not pushing it witht he pictures. I had loads more, but...yeah.
Cillinn is a Toa of Ice who was severely injured by bounty hunter Galvos. He was found by Mazeka and taken to the OoMN, where jack-of-all-trades scientific genius Shinkan repaired his mangled body, replacing much of it with artificial body parts.
Even though you've tried to make your entry look like it has genuinely robotic parts, I feel it looks quite cluttered in most places. I like the technic on the leg though. Gives it a very hardware-esque look. Anyway, I give you a 5. Best of luck!
I like that there are gears on the robotic parts, but some of them do look a bit awkward on the moc. The back could use some more armor and the long tube seems a bit out of place to me. I'll give it a 5. Good luck!
I don't like the gears in the middle of his leg, but ones on his ankle and torso are fitting. I think you could've done without the tube, it sticks out way too far. I like the head and torso designs a lot though. Best of luck! :)