"Um, Callux, where are we going to go?" Hazeroth asked. "Uh, well I don't know. I just had the urge to head back to the place where this journey started; Turaga Tahu's Hut." Callux replied. As the two Toa approached the deceased Turaga's Hut, the Toa both hathe feeling they were being watched. Just as the Toa were about to enter the Hut, an Orange Toa with a Black mask stepped out of the Hut. "My name is Draconic and i am an Agent of the Order of Mata Nui! And here with me is a new recruit named Yahru. You are under arrest for assination of Turaga Tahu!" The Toa named Draconic said. "Um, I didn't assaniate Turaga Tahu." Callux tells the OoMN agents the TRUE story. "Well, im sorry about arresting you, and you are unarrested!" Draconic said. "Arghh! I wanted to catch some bad guys!" The young agent named Yahru said. "Well, since we have nothing else to do we volunteer to assist your search!" Draconic said. "And I volenteer to destroy you! MWAHAHAHA!" A voice in the shadows answered. All of a sudden a silver and brown being walked out of the shadows, sword ready. The being aimed his sword at the four Toa and the sword discharged a dark matter and struck a nearby matoran, instantly killing the matoran. "You shall be arrested for your crimes against the Matoran!" Draconic shouted. Callux charged the Dark Being and knocked him off balance. Hazeroth replied and attacked the Being and Yahru and Draconic soon joined in. As a Team, the four Toa easilly overpowered the Dark being. "I shall soon return! And i will soon destroy you! You shall never reach Altus Magma!" And with that, the being disapeared. "Well, we now know that this battle will be tough! And that we'll need more on our side, but we also know, that as a team, we can fight evil!" Callux said.
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Okay guys, ive been really busy, going to camp, helping my dad renovate our church and then my Dog died and after that my moms chicken died. And now with VBS (btw my dad is our chuch's pastor). But i managed to have a brake and post this. Hopefully next week things will start slowing down! But, i hope y'all enjoyed!
I just checked my mail inbox and I heard that you want to use Spectre in the Bionicle thing. Sorry that I left the group before finding out what you wanted to say. Feel free to use Spectre in any way you like. :)
Quoting Andrew31kbrick193 ///
I forgot to say this, I love how you made Yahru a young OoMN agent. I put a portion of that into Yahru's new backstory. I made a few changes to his old one. I haven't posted the new story yet.
Interesting story. I like it. It does seem rather non-stop without breaks for paragraphs though, making it somewhat hard to read in areas. Also, good news! I got an eBay order, and when it gets here I should finally have a Maxilos mask, thus letting me build Callux. I'm interested to see where the story goes, and even more so to see what you do with Ekorak. Oh, and yes, I did read it all :)