Coming back from the lands of Sulfarh at the end of the world,
weary of battle, Gorken and his band finds his sister bruised
from abuse by the captain of the patrol from Mythron...
Since they have been away for a very long time,
they find that things have turned for the worst in their natal country...
They now have to rely on the informations of a mysterious stranger,
who knows the land and it s intricacies...
Seemingly guided by a strong sense of justice, he divulged at the risk
of his own security, the names of those responsible for this outrage!
You did well to inform us stranger!
now, will you follow your heart and bring justice to the land once more?
I am needed elsewhere!
It seems everybody is scared of this patrol!
we have better be prepared for their arrival, this 'beastman' seems pretty nasty!
Leave him to me, these are my concerns!
make sure to stay hidden from their view, it will give us the element of surprise!
you will know when to act!
.......AND THE NEXT MORNING...........
Prepare your taxes for the patrol!
Oh, please my brother!
do not put yourself in harms way, forget about this incident, I will move my kiosk
in another village, we lost Borgus already, you are all that is left of our family,
I cannot bear to loose you too!
Borgus was a weakling just as you are!
it is no surprise to me that he has disappeared, all the reason more to redeem our
family name, father s soul must be tormented from the shame!
the Brahkaas s honor will shine once more!!!
The villagers assemble for the taxes in great haste....
and the patrol finally arrives....
CAPTAIN S SOLDIER;
HEY! YOU! you are not from Enalica!
I have never seen you before!
Who is this man that stands defiant in my path?
thanks Freeling! I know it s confusing when you read my comments, here s why...I m about recycling ecolo, better managing the ressources, in my groups, I erase past comments to save space on the pages, this is my way of saving-managing space better, people complain about the pages s performance, but, keep 'garbage' in memory, I m not, I like the pages fast, so, I erase, and manage the space the most efficiently possible, I m sorry and understand, it s not as bad when I m available to answer right away, but, when I go to work, sort a scene, and lots of people comment, the responses are far from the corresponding comment, I m real happy about the recent pages s performance, and d like to keep it that way without Sean to have to invest more...
Quoting El Barto !
thanks El barto! I wanted to add to the scheme and trend, a different angle, 'braveheart' is one of my best movie ever, injustice is one of my themes, you can bet you ll see some disturbing scenarios, lol, I mix it with humor to keep it light, but, it makes for reflection.
Quoting Parrington Levens
thanks Parr! I try my best, I know I did good when I like to read them again, it improved a lot by scripting on paper all the scenarios like a cartoon, sadly my building techniques are still not as I d like, but, at least, they re cool to read.
CHEWBACCA! Awesome storytelling, brilliantly staged fight scenes and nicely built. Great stuff!
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October 19, 2013
CHEWY!!!!! Great stuff here Cyberfrank! The action was wonderful and well paced. Best of all was the writing, fantastically hilarious. Love the personality you developed in each of the characters so quickly. And, of course, what can be said about Chewy? Even though his arms were ripped from his body (perfectly fitting if you've played the video game), I can see him returning here and there just to bring a proud tear to my eye. Well done! A splendid way to start the day. ;)
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October 19, 2013
Great episode! Gorken had quite a collection of body parts around by the end of it! It's nice to see Chewie finally found some modesty and put a pair of pants on.
Nice MOC! Cool building. Very cool buildings. Anyways, here's a tip on replying to comments... You seem to always write in the reply boxes, you're supposed to write outside of them. Such as, when you click reply, you'll see something like this..
Quoting What's his face
Your LOM stories are my favorites. They're hilarious. (You don't comment in here, this is where the comment of the person who commented goes.)
(You comment right here, outside of the box.) I'll show you what it looks like below when you do it right.
Quoting Stormjay Rider
Your LOM stories are my favorites. They're hilarious.
Quoting matt rowntRee
thanks Matt! lol, of course you might know, I used him thinking of your jokes! I have nt played a video game for a long time now, it took me a fair amount of time to write the script, 2-3 hrs.
As always your story progresses natuarally with the scenes and keeps one interested. And of course, it would not be a story from you without some clever humor! Oh, and I knew right away this was yours from the thumb pic... it had that 'frankish' look about it! :)
Awesome episode Frank ! I love the reference to Chewie and it was funny because the beast man was wearing pants . I loved the arrows especially the one in the guys head cool! I also like the effect of cutting that guys head off! Can't wait for the next episode!